is this a good essay? if i should change anything please tell me!

What grade is this for? Because depending on the grade, then I can see what needs to be fixed.

First of all you need to change the title (if that tile is not mandatory) to why college should be free and not why should college be free

second there is a typo in your first paragraph and some wording issues

i would change it with An immense amount of students could not and cannot afford to pay tuition for their education

make sure to include in all three of your body paragraphs information supporting you main ideas make sure to tell where you got the information and make sure to quote, for instance in your 3rd body paragraph you could find an article on average cost a student spends on textbooks and stuff like that be carful while doing this and QUOTE AND TELL WHERE YOU GOT IT FROM SO YOU DO NOT PLAGERIZE

good job on your transitions

and so far you are doing good on your essay

once you fix this stuff up it will match the rubric

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the chicken because the chicken has to lay the egg i think am i right ?

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The egg  

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because the egg had to hatch into a chicken.

Also what if two birds that weren't really chickens created a chicken egg.

so the egg came first

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"little town of lava", or "little volcanic town"

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hope this helps! :)

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Explanation: The Rainforest Foundation US is a non-profit NGO working in Central and South America. It is one of the first international organizations to support the indigenous peoples of the world's rainforests in their efforts to protect their environment and fulfill their rights to land, life, and livelihood. The Rainforest Foundation helps protect the incredibly rich biological diversity of the rainforest and the cultural integrity of the peoples whose lives and livelihoods are inextricably linked to those forests.

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i can not see it

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This is 100 points, because I have been studying, so I wrote in another language

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This is 100 points, because I have been studying, so I wrote in another language.

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this is chinese, i have also been studying it. my dad is chinese so i think it would be cool to learn the full language :)